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Poor Poetry

In my brain is a collection of thoughts
They consider life, in it’s complexity
And entirety

When I come to write these down
After a while I stop, then I frown
At the rhymes

To put feelings into thoughts
Is difficult enough anyway, it is
Worse when writing down

It misses something in this state
A vital ingredient, only found
In the mind

The complexity lost
The thought no longer profound
What a waste

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Categories: Poetry, Thoughts
  1. 16/06/2009 at 4:45 am

    Wow, there are spelling errors and a slight lack of flow in a few of the stanzas but damn. I wish I could have written this.

    🙂 🙂

    I love poetry but I often feel like this.

    • anonymousteenager
      16/06/2009 at 7:49 am

      Damn WordPress, not having a spell checker 😦 I did write this rather quickly. I’ve corrected the spelling error now though. Thanks for the nice comment 🙂

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